Melissa’s critique was exactly what I was looking for. It’s obvious Melissa really took the time to read my story. Her comments were insightful and helpful. She pointed out what she liked about the story, what got her interest, and then where I could improve. The questions she asked were on point and made me think about how I could make the work better. All in all, her critique is a valuable tool, not only for revision of the story submitted, but for every story I write in the future. I’ll be using her services again. Thanks, Melissa!